Topic: A do-gooder that gets rewarded for his sacrifice.
Story:
Quandite is a normal kid but who is extremely nice.While walking to school he makes sure no one gets run over by a car (kind of like a crossing guard).
When he is at school walking to class he picks up any books that people drop.
When someone looks lonely he cheers them up with a nice talk.
If people forget there homework he sometimes does it for them.
Ironically, today he forgot to do his homework because he did someone else's.
While walking to class Quandite is sweating crazy (like he just got out of the pool).
He is about to enter the classroom (already five minutes late) when...
The fire alarm goes off and he is literally saved by the bell!
Quandite gets another day to complete his OWN homework and continue to spread his kindness.
This sounds like the everyday kid in someones fake world. lol. Regardless still seems like a pretty good story
ReplyDeleteStory sounds a little too bland and simple, but seems like if there was some improvements, could be really good. If there was a dramatic twist at the end, your story would seem much better.
ReplyDeleteI like that it's a simple story, but it could become unique. Also I like the ending and the fact that the bell saves him.
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